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    Author: natasha
    ASL Info:    15/f/brampton
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 113/159/52
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 793
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    Bytes: 535



    Description:
       this is my friends poem i love it so much it makes me sad. but i love it .


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    As I sit here and wonder, how can this is be
    That this as happened, to someone like me
    I thought it would last forever, in the end i had to pay
    I'm such of fucking idiot, I let her slip away
    How could this happen, thought she was mine
    My friends ask me if I'm ok, I lie and say I'm fine
    Is it really over?, Are you over me?
    I just miss you so much, it happened so quickly
    I need to know if this was meant to be
    I loved you so much, you meant the world to me




    Submitted on 2004-09-04 11:16:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      please dont leave this poem untitled...
    it is so hard to find someone who knows what they have, i child thats nameless can not feel alive.
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by ibelikeso | [ Reply to This ]
      nice poem, very good and touching except for one thing, the word f*ck, f*ucker or f*cking to me makes a poem slightly less meaningful and more petty...i dunno...my opinion..
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by outsider | [ Reply to This ]
      sorry buddy
    somtimes u just have to let it go, cos its meant to be dat way.
    sounds like an heartbreak... try to let such ill-feelings melt out..
    really emotional ok.
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by realpassion | [ Reply to This ]


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