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    dots Submission Name: for my baby girldots
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    Author: ibelikeso
    ASL Info:    27/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.99 - 119/106/24
    Words: 1673
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       this is what my girl is and more!


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    dotsfor my baby girldots
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    This is the girl i had to show what a real man is

    Not every man plays, not everyman kills,
    A young girls heart with his player like skills.
    There is real men out there, few but they are real.
    U just Got to seek him, It is part of the deal!
    No good is a man who makes you all things in life,
    He will only start feeling tide down to his wife.
    Seek the wise, with a purpose to live,
    Because he will be the one who would trully give.
    Try to find someone whom you can make smile,
    And dont give yourself until he waits for a while.
    There's time to wait, the right thing will be...
    For him to ask you, to wear his wedding ring.
    Know there are men who are willing to wait
    For true love to come with deliverance in fate.
    So will you be the one, to who i can confess?
    That i'm just a prince...
    Waiting to find my princess.

    She is the perfect gift to me

    Your heart is torn and broken
    But at least i have every piece
    I could hear it beating softly
    And saying "will you help me please!"
    I can not heal past wounds
    Nor give you a new heart
    But i know someone who loves you
    And wants you to accept a brand new start
    I promise to treat it kindly
    And to care for it so much
    To watch it healing slowly
    As i caress it with my touch
    I hope my words can be band-aids
    That comfort to your heart will bring
    As i make a brand new song
    A song that both of us can sing
    So know i take you with me
    As God lifts me up in life
    I accept you as my friend
    As my lover and my wife

    She is the constant question in my mind

    Why is it every time you write to me
    You take my breath away?
    Why is it when i know your there
    It hurts that you are away?
    Why is it that i can not even see your face
    But i can see your heart?
    Why is it when you speak of love
    I thank God for a new start?
    Why is it that i love you so
    Even more than i love myself?
    Why is it that we dont know these things
    But only time will tell?
    Why is it that you wrote to me
    Until i belived that you are my queen to be?
    Why is it that when i give my heart
    For you to keep, i know im royalty?
    Why is it that i ask these things
    Without expecting a reply?
    Why is it that i feel like i, without God
    And you, will surely die?
    So in this rhyme i write these things
    For you to know my love
    My heart knows only one, my friend, my girl,
    My baby and dove.

    She is as beautiful as the complexion of her skin

    Your skin color mocha
    Sounds similar to me
    Dont you know i am the same
    And you dont want to see
    Ok so what is the color mocha?
    It is the perfect blend
    So how can i convince you
    That to you my heart i send
    Didnt you get my PM
    About the places where peole dont see
    I mean dont care if i am white or black
    Much less what color is next to me
    God has given me a gift
    To see beyond what is there
    On the outside of your heart
    Sorry baby, i dont care
    As long as you are normal
    And some how not deformed
    Than you are more than beautiful
    You are the perfect form.

    She makes me crazy in love

    I have never done drugs
    Dont know what you've felt
    But if i know your in pain
    Then in pain my heart melts
    Through your writtings i see you
    Each one i see you more
    How you become a princess
    The one that i adore
    You have told me about your life
    And i have to confess
    That i would be with you
    Even if it is all a mess
    Only through God
    Can we make all things right
    I have told you i will be there
    So we can pick up this fight
    The fight against death
    And a world with no love
    Lets show them the way
    To the path up above.

    She is a beast becasue of her fierce love for me

    The beast does not need to be tamed
    It needs to be taught
    As a wild and free beast
    You have completed my thought
    This beast needs to learn
    About what real love is
    The kind to show grace
    Instead of a diss
    So i have come to warn you
    You will change if im around
    You will be such a good thing
    Love comes with no sound
    With no warnings to say
    That i might lead you to sin
    No beast is within me
    Theres an angel within
    Someone that loves you
    Doesnt even know why
    But you are the one
    For whom i would lay down and die.

    She is the ghost of every past lover in my heart

    This is aww so beautiful
    The poems is ohhh so nice
    That is a lovely feeling
    For which i would pay any price
    I want to be the one to hold you
    I want to feel your soft heart beat
    I wish i was the one your holding
    As i sleep in that subway seat
    There is so much out there
    The things that you need to see
    Places that people dont care
    Of what color your skin might be
    The whole world is Gods creation
    It is a playground in deed
    You have to take it all in
    As God fullfills your every need
    So i ask if i can guide you
    Through the big and lovely earth
    Because it is ohh so beautiful
    Its a beauty you deserve

    She is the mimic of a girl inside of her that i bring to life

    You have to see past the mirror
    You have to look into the soul
    There is watery eyes back there
    As your life stories it unfolds
    The fake smile that hides those feelings
    That you hold on from within
    You have to learn to change that fake smile
    Because more pain to you it will bring
    So look into your heart
    And see what you have to find
    To bring joy into the girl
    The girl that live inside your mind
    I want to help you find the reason
    I want to teach you about true joy
    The joy that lives inside of me
    The joy God's given to this boy

    She is the one that will forever keep me company

    Every night for me is lonely
    Even more, it is way too cold
    For me to live without you
    A heart for me to mold
    I want to be there to keep you warm
    Keep you company in your bed
    Then the final words "i love you!"
    Will be all that can be said

    She has asked me to always love her the same

    If your talking about me
    Thats the way i will stay
    For every night i hope
    That by your side i will lay
    So you can see me while i sleep
    The way i think of you all night
    I will hug you and ill kiss you
    I will hold you close, so tight
    Just to warm you for your sake
    And when you awake me every hour
    Pleasureable love we will make
    I will touch you with my heart
    I will kiss you with my soul
    We will write this passion somewhere
    To make this a love story is my goal
    You gave me access to your heart
    You let my in deep in your mind
    As long as God is always with me
    This is how ill love you...
    Love you for the rest of time

    She is the drug i am addicted to

    Ranting ranting
    On and on
    How lovely is this life
    How lovely is this song
    I am in love i am IN love
    With a beautyful person
    God has sent from above
    Can your mind understand
    Can your knowledge conceive
    Together is a blessng
    We both have received
    There is so much love
    I am addicted to you
    You are a pure drug
    What am i to do
    I just take you all in
    Into my heart and into my veins
    You make me see God
    How awesome He reigns
    Unlike my love that
    Keeps on and on
    This littel rant
    Will come to be done

    To me she sits next to God

    Today has been day of reflections
    I have had an excellent day
    I remmebered HE who gave me life
    And I remmembered she is here to stay
    My heart is split in two
    Between God and his creation
    How can i do His will
    When she needs so much attention
    I can only trust
    He will teach me what is right
    Learn to love her so
    While I pray to Him at night
    I am broken into parts
    To give all to Him and to her
    I am here for both
    Being His son becoming her lover
    So have you thought about me?
    throughout this shiny simple day
    Because i know that He has
    He does this every day!





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    ||| Comments |||
      i could never put into words~
    i could never read this poems~
    just once and would i be able~
    to find my heart open prince~
    this poems make me wonder~
    | Posted on 2006-09-05 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ]
      you took all these poems from the ones you wrote for me and posted them on here...you let your feelings show...I love you soo much you don't even know...I wish I could tell you how my heart jumps...I would lay in your arms...forever...until the end
    | Posted on 2004-09-06 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this is all great, I loved it. My favorite is "She is the ghost of every past lover in my heart". If I start commenting about the whole thing, I would never end but the truth is that it is all wonderful. Some are vivid, some, sincerely seems like you want to express yourself but you cant find the right words and keep describing and describing, but it's all good, because I just loved it! Every single one of them has a story / message. In the end they're all great, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by April0414 | [ Reply to This ]


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