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    dots Submission Name: conversationdots

    Author: hidden lady
    ASL Info:    28/female/nebraska
    Elite Ratio:    4.47 - 116/118/30
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       this poem is supossed be read with a beat. it's about a friend and I, and a conversation we were having.

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    fingered branched of
    chesnut colored hair
    fell from the unwise
    bramble of saline eyes.
    as she sat in front of me,
    waiting for answers and hope.
    she spoke.
    her voice; raspy,
    cracked like the sahara desert
    going on forever.
    dangerous, beautiful leading
    me into some dream like
    trance of unwilling fixation.

    she moved her hands nervously
    making an attempt at
    feeling better as though
    that movement, that part of her
    body moving would
    magically set things strait.
    she smiles.
    revealing all the secrets
    of her childhood tears.

    setting her hands down
    on mine, she pulls her
    fear and strength out of
    her self as though it were
    an infected limb being amputated.
    she sets it in front of me.
    "what am I?"
    her eyes became pools
    of water, deep and blue.

    my response was quick
    trickling down the stone
    steps of time until it disapears
    into the ocean of spoken word.
    my eyes became mud.
    dark and brown
    seeping with determination
    to save this friend,
    this sister!

    the fear sitting just in
    front of me turns and fades
    like the mist of the early morning
    leaving the courage I need
    to lead,
    her back to her forgotten

    Submitted on 2004-09-04 15:54:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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