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    dots Submission Name: One Empty Bottledots

    Author: slwht
    ASL Info:    19/f/
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 96/95/31
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsOne Empty Bottledots

    You raised your arm
    and took another shot.
    You scanned the room,
    only to remember I wasn't there.
    I stayed home with the flu,
    so you went with the boys.
    I always thought I could trust you,
    because you said you loved me.
    As you blurrily looked around,
    there she was.
    Tall, blond, pretty, perfect.
    Or so she appeared in your state of mind.
    You thought you could look, just not touch;
    until she walked across the room.
    With just one look from her, you knew.
    With just one word, you considered it,
    With just one kiss you decided.
    Maybe you thought it could stay a secret,
    your little twenty minute Barbie Doll.
    But you didn't count on people seeing you,
    people hearing you brag about it,
    and people watching you throw me away,
    with just one night.
    I hope your happy and that it was worth it.
    You cried, and expected my forgiveness.
    All we have left now, is one empty bottle,
    and two broken hearts.

    Submitted on 2004-09-04 18:22:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, if this piece is true-what a jerk he is...its good that u got the anger out of ur system and actual turned it into something kind of pos...a poem-nice write
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by brokenmirror | [ Reply to This ]

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