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    dots Submission Name: Silent Stringsdots
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    Author: Poechick13
    ASL Info:    16/f/IN
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 42/59/22
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 381
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 440



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    dotsSilent Stringsdots
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    Velvet shadows through the trees
    Antique lockets thrown in water
    Flowing into desolate oceans
    But to be lost to someone else

    Abandoned thoughts from under rocks
    Radiate wisdom from the walls
    Once standing, now ruins
    Of what used to be

    Unknown longing, determined fate
    Dried, crumbling legends
    Danced on into the night
    To the tune of forgotten hope




    Submitted on 2004-09-04 23:47:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was a really good write and i was surprised that not more people took the time to comment on it...you had great word usage here...i really enjoyed reading it...great job, sry i don't have any helpful suggestions
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by morte | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't believe that no one's commented on this yet. It's really good, and you picked the perfect catagory for it..."dark." Life is at times dark, half of out 24 hours day is spent that way in fact.
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Lennox | [ Reply to This ]



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