Standing here in the pouring rain where everything has changed. looking into ur eyes, tears in mine.
all i want is you to be mine. lefted here with a broken heart ,our love fell apart.
Reading your face, scearching for my answers to questions. But we both remain specahless.
Your walking free. with nothing to be shown.
Im just lefted here out in the cold.
I know what you feel with your broken heart, I must pray for your broken heart and all the broken hearts all over the world and I hope you will find that man who could make your heart happy again. I like this line too much" all i want is you to be mine. lefted here with a broken heart ,our love fell apart." But your poem lacks something, I think it is to write the spelling of the words well and take care of. You have the word " specahless ", great mistake to write it like this way. You did great and I hope you can entertain us with your poems. Khaled Abdallah.