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    dots Submission Name: Pain into Beautydots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 795
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       This is really about Conor Oberst (I'm obsessed with him), but it would work for most any artist.

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    dotsPain into Beautydots

    He's a wizard
    magically turning pain into beauty,
    and you'd bathe in his tears
    for the magic to become your own.

    Submitted on 2004-09-05 17:05:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey i was just listening to him earlier...because of you of course mentioning him to me...lol...yeah you could pretty much compare this to any artist...wonderful job ...miss cuddle..smiles ange
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! This piece was very insightfull. I liked it alot. It seems very real, very felt.

    I like the allusion to wizardy, and magic, everything tied in very nicely together! Keep being creative!

    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by Eah | [ Reply to This ]
      so beautiful and heart-felt. i know how it can be to be obsessed with someone you don't even know. bathing in his tears is a very nice touch!
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I heart Conor!

    Yes. This is an awesome poem about him. Oh how I love Conor, and Arienette for that matter. But then again, I guess you could assume that from my name, oh how emo I am.


    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by emo-tastic | [ Reply to This ]
      you're right - it works for most artists. isn't it strange that pain evokes such beautiful things sometimes?? one of my best poems (at least for me) is very painful. anyway I like the 'bathe in his tears' line. great image. and this is a great poem.
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]

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