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    dots Submission Name: Lostdots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 281
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 605



    Description:
       A poem about a lost love that is searching for hope.


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    dotsLostdots
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    Here I set,
    waiting for you to find me.
    I've been lost for sometime now,
    and I've been without you
    in the darkness even longer.
    I know that a whole world separates the two of us,
    but why should that matter?
    Our love is real,
    I know it is,
    I can feel it when I breathe.
    Why is it then that this is so hard?
    Why can't we seem to find each other?
    All I can say is that I will wait for you
    until we meet again.
    And I know we will meet again,
    it's only a matter of when!




    Submitted on 2004-09-05 18:47:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Looking at your stuff and it all is sweet and bitter at the same time,this one strikes me because you seem to understand reincarnation and how our relationships transend lifetimes. I'll read more later.
    | Posted on 2004-09-20 00:00:00 | by dmm | [ Reply to This ]
      good writing You will get the hang of it
    hang in there
    you got good writing skills keep up the good work welcome Eah
    | Posted on 2004-09-06 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      I know what you mean. It is totally torture waiting for some one "speical". I liked the flow of this poem.It just all fit together.
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by sug90 | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanks a bunch for that... that means a whole that! Now, I'm going to try to figure out how to post another on this thing!

    -Eah
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by Eah | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good write. Welcome to Elite Skills! I enjoyed this tremendously. Waiting, searching, hoping for that special someone is torture but (I think) it'll be worth it when the time comes. Great write, and Welcome again.
    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]



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