shes twisted in side, screaming , thinking and cant handle it anymore.
she doesnt know what she did to decive you so.
crying cuting abuseing hurting, .
shes bleeding.
shes twisted inside and out. and doesnt know what its all about.
She cant help him she cant even help her self.
no wonder she cuts her self.
i thought this was a very expressive and emmotional piece, but cutting! this seems like a love piece where he's not talking to you and you don't know why, and you like him and it's burning you inside. well that's what i think, good write.
self mutilation is a terrible choice in solving ones problems, they leave scars that remind you daily of the pain you have felt and the pain that you have inflicted upon yourself. You obviously have talent as a upcoming writer, I hope you continue to do so, I like the emotional expressions, but make sure to check your spelling before posting, have a great day...Bob:)
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