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    dots Submission Name: Under Wings of a Forsaken Birddots
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    Author: Poechick13
    ASL Info:    16/f/IN
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 42/59/22
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 301
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    dotsUnder Wings of a Forsaken Birddots
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    The cold air seems so hollow
    Sitting here so quiet and alone
    Waiting for the moonlight
    So brightly it has shone

    Caught in my own mid-glance
    A lone raven in the sky
    Shining so red from the sun
    As it is slowly flying by

    It seems that everything stops
    The bird is hovering still
    Feathers posess a certain glow
    Eyes whose glance could kill

    The air around it feeling
    A sense of utter loss
    Creating itself a barrier
    No one could ever cross

    Deep in my mind I understand
    Were not too different, bird and I
    Misunderstood, dark yet good
    The moon comes in the sky

    This placid scene comes to life
    The bird now flies away
    I wonder now what caused it all
    Why couldn't it have stayed




    Submitted on 2004-09-06 22:22:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I dont know what to say. this is a beautiful peice. Its a little hard to understand the meaning. But none the less good. Keep it up.
    Jason
    | Posted on 2004-09-06 00:00:00 | by wonderlug17 | [ Reply to This ]



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