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    dots Submission Name: The Dreamersdots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 286
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       Dreams, Nightmares, and Beauty... a soul searching for peace and beauty in the world.


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    dotsThe Dreamersdots
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    Dreamers
    Those mortals that see things
    for what they are
    but don't limit their imaginations.
    The things they dream can come alive
    in various forms,
    but they all have one thing in common,
    their possibilities are endless

    Nightmares
    Created versions of our own Hell
    manifested by the things we fear the most.
    The one thing that holds people back
    from what they dream.
    The versions of Hell are unlimited
    but one thing is certain
    these nihtmares feed of the fears
    of the dreamers.

    Beauty
    What the dreamers seek,
    and what they find
    when all the fears and nightmares
    finally fade away.
    This fading occurs
    only when these dreamers
    can see hope,
    and when they put that hope
    into a form that can fight
    the evil that persists
    within every soul.




    Submitted on 2004-09-07 17:45:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This piece really speaks the truth about dreaming - loved the descriptive words and feeling you placed into it. Only thing I could add in suggestion is watch for spelling - those words always catch ya off guard, you know? I always have editing problems myself. ^_~
    | Posted on 2004-09-18 00:00:00 | by Color_the_Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      as a dreamer myself I must say how true this is.
    this is good, I cant find much wrong, and what I can I can't remember, which makes this great

    -sjatos
    | Posted on 2004-09-07 00:00:00 | by whiteshadows | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminded me of an entry in a dictionary, but I mean that in the best way. It was a very creative dictionaryentry. i love how you connected each idea to the next, which finally pulled through to a coherent conclusion. i liked the logic of this piece. It is written the way the mind would actually process something. What you've written is all very true; nice work.
    | Posted on 2004-09-07 00:00:00 | by Memphis | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this because i myslef know very well the dreamers perspective of things because i am a dreamer myslef. very good write
    | Posted on 2004-09-07 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]



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