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    dots Submission Name: Catsdots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 323
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 517



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       Dirived from my philosophy class... i know it's a bit odd... but just think about! And Enjoy it!


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    dotsCatsdots
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    What separates
    a dead cat
    from a living cat?

    The ability to move,
    or breath?
    The ability to see
    and play?

    Or is it something more,
    something that distinguishes
    every animate object
    from its opposite?

    Could it be
    that the form within the animal
    has diminished?
    Could it be
    it's life force has drowned
    and all that is left
    is what the naked eyes can see?




    Submitted on 2004-09-10 09:22:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      never thought of it then again i have never had a real pet. hay that is well strucktured well written but I just don't connect with it . sorry
    I know "if you have nothing construcive to say don't say anything eh! " but I just have to write somthing down. this peace dose not grip me or move me in anyway. it subject has not value or worth to me. hay thats just me though I am sure it appeals to others. that is just moy 2 cents .
    | Posted on 2004-09-11 00:00:00 | by slybee22 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a marble of a poem...cats.., the title is quite different.. and the ripple effect has got quite the grip, on the in and outs of something, maybe not seen. Neat!
    | Posted on 2004-09-10 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure that pure rhetoric makes for a great poem. I was intrigued by the topic, yet it felt more like prose than poetry. I kept waiting for the lines where you gave your views on lifes animation.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-09-10 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]



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