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    dots Submission Name: Flip the Pagesdots
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    Author: PastelSky
    ASL Info:    18/F/In the clouds
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 181/223/49
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 523
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsFlip the Pagesdots
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    Flip the pages,
    Flip the pages.
    Let me hear that ruffled sound.
    The crisp reminder of the ages.

    Flip the hour glass,
    Flip the hour glass.
    Let me hear that muffled grain of sand.
    Slinking ever so silently as we let it pass.

    Flip the radio knob,
    Flip the radio knob.
    Let me hear that 'click' and that tune.
    Let me hear the smiles and the sobs.

    Flip the pages,
    Flip the pages.
    Let me hear that ruffled sound,
    The crisp reminder of the ages,
    The wise wisdom of the sages,

    The soft leaves like rolling stones,
    Never stopping, letting go.

    The grains of sand are piling fast,
    The radio chimes are flying past,
    Yet I will always remember the pages.

    The pages of my life.




    Submitted on 2004-02-24 20:46:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey, this is really nice. I liked the way it flowed and it served it's purpose.
    | Posted on 2004-03-09 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]
      This reads kind of fast.... great effect on this type of topic... great metaphor and word choices... nice to see a different style and a non-depressing presentation of a topic of this sort... keep em coming
    | Posted on 2004-02-25 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]



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