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    dots Submission Name: Blackdots
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    Author: painfullyme
    ASL Info:    23/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 335/456/72
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 342
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       in a very dark place lately. can't help but seeing the black. let me know what is thought.


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    black on black
    darkened by night
    hiding the truth
    fleeing the light
    running away
    from those who would care
    pretending to hate
    he who lingers there
    lying to those
    who just want what's best
    knowing success
    but failing the test
    can't help but wonder
    how to move on
    looking for love
    and finding it gone
    pleading for hope
    yet none can be found
    reaching up high
    falling hard to the ground
    close to the ending
    finally near
    a sorry goodbye
    to those i hold dear
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    Submitted on 2004-09-11 21:50:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't really have much to say about this peice, it has to do with darkness, and I kno wut your talking about, cuase we all get that feeling, it's happens to some(like me) more than other's but everyone's eventually gonna feel this way, it's a nice write!good job.Peace,and war. pain and pleasure!don't ask me what that means, i dunno it just came to me, I kno it's gay, but it describes the human race.Anywaysis, later
    -camoflage
    | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ]
      it's dark, beautiful, painful and true all at once. I can't comment on the actual writing/poetryness, but i can commenton the feeling. I thought it was a wonderful piece.
    | Posted on 2004-09-12 00:00:00 | by Dead Weight | [ Reply to This ]



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