Get terribly drunk, and me and you will have a poetry writting competition. Sound like a good or bad idea? (this is to extend the comment) Well it was actually a pretty good read now that I looked it over.
I think that the simple words that you used go really well with the simple message that this poem gives. There are areas to improve on, flow and rhyming need some work but you were only partly sober after all.
I've often thought that the old "He loves me, he loves me not" should be replaced by "Should I tell him, should I not". It's something we all struggle with.
But I didn't get this line at all... "This strangle me slowly inside takes me to a place I can't hide" Do you mean "strangle" or another word. I thought it was struggle but that doesn't make sense either.
Also, I felt that some of the lines had forced rhymes. Maybe you could try free verse. It helps you express things better without having to rhyme.
i really liked this poem.. i felt like it reached out to me.. it explains how im feeling right now. i added it to my favorites just because of that... I SWEAR IT SPOKE TO ME! .. but anyways, great job... for the fact you were partly sober ~nameless child