Fugue by Transcendancing

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Author:	Transcendancing
Elite Ratio:	5.13 - 365/214/35
Words:	47

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	359

Description:
Just can't shake the mood at the moment... and this piece was born from that restless lethargic feeling.

Fugue

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Dragging.
Pen across the paper.
Time across the clock.
Blank expression upon
My face.
Despondent, discordant...
Fingers upon the keys
Words, fail to come together,
Lingering half formed,
Layering without purpose.
The mind gropes,
Awkwardly -
Through the fugue.

Submitted on 2004-09-13 22:33:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  True fugue has two intertwined themes.
I shall surmise the two are the thoughts mingling in the mind and not allowing one to stand out and speak! Thoughts over-riding each other, a great problem in writing. Hence the half formed and layering, and the awkwardness. How wonderfully done, especially when one understands the true meanings of WORDS.
Not a brain freeze, but a mental over-run!
| Posted on 2004-11-23 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
  just surfing through some old poems. i liked your take on the fugue state. it kind of reminds me being in a fog, where consciousness is somewhat clouded, and you are trying to grasp at something. it's obvious that you were quite lucid when you wrote the piece. just wanted you to know that i digged it. peace out-layla
| Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by colagirl | [ Reply to This ]
  Damn Skippy! I'll post a piece I wrote about writers block tomorrow :) Besides me (joking...) your the best in the house Trans.
| Posted on 2004-10-12 00:00:00 | by aghori | [ Reply to This ]
  i love that word, "fugue." i know exactly how it feels, too, and have been through a few lately. that draggy feeling, and you mention layering without purpose... you've described it well here. the only thing i didn't like was all the periods. i think they should be used sparingly, to really pack a punch. other than that, this is great!
| Posted on 2004-10-03 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  I don't think I fully understand, but that's just me being stupid, not you. Anyway, I love, love, loved this. It's simple, like a breath of fresh air. Every simple line being a sentence kind of completes it. Nice work.

-emo.
| Posted on 2004-10-01 00:00:00 | by emo-tastic | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey, this was well written...you held my interest by laying your words down with skill...not a hot topic so you did well
| Posted on 2004-09-27 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
  I like the pun on fugue (as in the musical composition and Dissociative Fugue). That's pretty clever. I suppose writer's block and Dissociative Fugue produce similar confusion.
| Posted on 2004-09-14 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this one! Maybe because I've been there too, but you make it sound as real as possible, you describe it to a tee. "Time across the clock", "Layering without purpose", I loved those two lines. A great write about not writing, because it's right on, so write on. Ok before I get carried away, I loved your poem. Hope it opens things up for you. When the dam breaks the flood follows.

Phil
| Posted on 2004-09-13 00:00:00 | by phil askew | [ Reply to This ]
  whod've thought you could write something about writers block? This is very cool, and very original... nicely written m'lady. interesting to see the way you describe your thoughts on something so base, because you make it sound so incredible, adn the frustrating becomes beautiful...love it
-drizzt
| Posted on 2004-09-13 00:00:00 | by Drizzt | [ Reply to This ]
  aye curumba you nailed the writers block syndrome and emotion ride simply and originally. the best one i have ever read about the despair that consumes a mind, after feeling cheated when no words come to mind. i look forward to read more, and i will read your other poems also.
| Posted on 2004-10-27 00:00:00 | by Josh | [ Reply to This ]
  Oddly enough, fugue works here, as a contention of immediate foo-brained fogness. Whereas Bach wrote inventions, two different melodies that can be played simultaneously, Beethoven was a master of the fugue,
three melodies entertwined. Isn't it strange how Ludwig was a creative genuis who suffered from depressed "fugue" quite often. Thanks for sharing,
nansofast
| Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]

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