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    dots Submission Name: Ragedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    The irate man's voice reminds me of a bitter pill that you push to the top of your mouth with the underside of your tongue and pray not to taste as you swallow.





    Submitted on 2004-02-25 22:21:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cuddle,

    i know that taste very well. it's a pretty accurate image i think. i don't think there's much else to say. i was writing on the way home from where ever today; a poem about rage: i used a similar image///so we're on the nail together with this one if nothing else.

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    | Posted on 2004-02-26 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]
      (in the most gentlemanly soothing voice as possible) nice write and imagery... keep em coming
    | Posted on 2004-02-26 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
      Rofl @ Krucible. ...but also good one Amy. I never have the nerve to post these bright little thoughts. Not sure i would classify it as poetyr..perhaps random thoughts, or quotation..but whatever, good thought, well expressed. Silver
    | Posted on 2004-02-26 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      although alot would welcome rage inside their mouths..i like it..direct imagery..
    | Posted on 2004-02-26 00:00:00 | by Krucible | [ Reply to This ]


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