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    dots Submission Name: Grave Possesseddots
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    Author: Damien Vladimir
    ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122/89/35
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsGrave Possesseddots
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    Go!
    Have you ever lived my life?
    I don't think you've lived like me.
    Why must you create a lie?
    Trying to feel and be like me,
    it's not a matter of pretending

    My mental actions fuction best,
    when i'm feeling like the beast of hunger seeking,
    decomposing corpses in morgues by any means

    soil elevating corpse,
    as my torso cleary shows,
    the intestine hungry maggotts
    as they eat and decompose,
    the extracting flesh of my old soul,
    as to expose my inner bones.

    Never has a human compared my life to theirs.
    I'm not as pure as you,
    and you as dead as me.
    Don't remember what i did,
    but i've come in front of you.

    Took your life,imprisoned you.
    Now your not of what you were before,
    Were you not in search of the nocturnal, the unknown?
    What a severed dream this turned to be, as demon you are now.

    Welcome to the graves.
    This is where our confort lays for us.
    As slaves to shades, and lunar rays awaken us.





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      ...perhaps the writer's true emotion lies
    coiled in a cavity behind the eye

    of some bemused explorer
    like heaven hovering o're a lover's kiss

    we sing the song that whispered
    I am the beginning of your bliss...

    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Nice, very nice. I especially liked the first stanza. Nice use of a full vocabulary. Too many are the poems that get no thought into terms of sounding or just being intelligent. I really felt a heavy vibe when I read this. Great Job!
    ~Monty
    | Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by Deep_Monty | [ Reply to This ]


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