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    dots Submission Name: Day and Nightdots
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    Author: Sophia
    ASL Info:    24/f/delhi
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 145/131/58
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDay and Nightdots
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    The Night cried out for remembrance
    For the Day stole its beauty
    When Day breaks, it does so with delight
    Closing the door on night's existence
    But, remember friends, not always is this a permanence
    Day will suffer repentance
    For it has to face the sunset
    The night shall rejoice once
    The stars and the moon fill its casket.




    Submitted on 2004-09-15 08:03:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A nice touch of reality in my fantasy based world and certainly a lot better than all that stuff about suicide etc. This for me was an inspiring piece, maybe I can look to the sky and write something like this one day. Thank you.
    | Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was good how you showed that there is not only beauty in the day but also in the night. Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by Celestial Star | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like how you compared the passing of day to night with death. A little morbid when I say it that way, but your poem works out beautifully. I like poems like this, they give you more to think about than just Day and Night like the title suggests. You go away with a new outlook sometimes, and that is always good. Keep it up and I hope to see more of your work.
    | Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by Unicorn Poet | [ Reply to This ]



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