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    dots Submission Name: Doomed to Wanderdots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 257
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 621



    Description:
       I wrote this while I was in Math class... I'm not sure what it's about yet, that something I should probably figure out. I know it has a purpose, or I wouldn't have written it, but I just have put my finger on it yet!


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    dotsDoomed to Wanderdots
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    Where do I belong?
    Can you tell me?
    I am a lost soul
    searching for sustinance.
    I will take anything I can find,
    but the most unfortunate part
    is that I find nothing.
    No one will ever find me,
    I am alone in this world.
    Why then do I continue the fight?
    I fight because I must,
    it's what I was created for.
    Of course you can not help me,
    because you are wandering alone as well.
    But one day we will meet,
    and we will both know the answer.
    Until that day though,
    we're doomed to wander.




    Submitted on 2004-09-15 11:30:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The picture in my head from this is astonishingly clear - I enjoyed the mood and setting, and appreciate the ring of truth to the piece. Well, that and poetry about wanderers...somehow, it always strikes me as profound, especially if it's well-made.
    | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by Color_the_Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand this sense of loneliness as I am going through it now! I really enjoyed how you are questioning yourself to someone who you do not know yet. (May it be religious, or romantically, it made sense in both to me.) Great job.
    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      This is kind of morbidly romantic. I'd say just look at the piece and see where thoughts or words are repeating that you might not have been aware of and look to try and put some variation in where you can. Pretty solid attampt though
    | Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]



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