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    dots Submission Name: Absurdly Happy.dots
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    Author: Torie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 205/226/75
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1331
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 236



    Description:
       Poetry disrupts the flow.
    For a higher purpose.

    Poetry puts to sleep
    The watch-dog of your mind.

    And all that is left is nothing.
    And everything.

    Victor.


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    dotsAbsurdly Happy.dots
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    Why reject me?
    They want to know what I do!
    I write poetry.

    Poetry does nothing.
    Poetry wrecks lives.

    I am happy.
    I am absurdly happy,
    Over nothing.

    Victor.




    Submitted on 2004-09-16 00:47:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      "There is only one honest impulse at the bottom of Puritanism, and that is to punish the man with a superiour capacity for happiness-to bring him down to the level of 'good' men-i, of stupid, cowardly, and chronically unhappy men."
    Anon.
    | Posted on 2004-09-22 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      HAH! YES...why not be happy just to be happy? it's a great feeling of life to be happy because you breath, because you blink... it's a true gift to be able to say you smile because smiling makes you smile... my friend you have a beautiful mind and being absurdly happy is the healthiest thing in the world... it lets you see the world in a beautiful and different light... I loved this poem... i'll make it a favorite if you don't mind and leave it at that... thanks for this piece and i'm happy that you're happy... Adios amigo and take care... i hope to hear from you... Travis
    | Posted on 2004-09-19 00:00:00 | by Mwa Ha Ha Ha Ha | [ Reply to This ]
      that was a kewl poem. i probably shouldn't use cool but i am not thinking today and can't speak.

    I really liked the whole idea and my favorite part was the last stanza.

    can't find anything wrong with it. so keep on writing. i'd like to see more of your work.
    | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by Maki | [ Reply to This ]
      haha yes you made me laugh again, though I understand the meaning and everything the main thing this did was make me laugh. don't mean to upset you with that but the over nothing part, that made me laugh. but it's great, that I'm insanely happy(literally) feel and the poem, of course.
    | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by DewdropMartini | [ Reply to This ]


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