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Ok....yet another poem about Jayme...maybe soon i'll pick another thing to write about, beside Jayme and Marching Band.....maybe shopping...but anyhoo, yeah...any thoughts, ideas, advice, suggestions, etc...will be appreciated...enjoy...
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I feel your palms on my chest As I taste your sweetest kiss. I soar high past the heavens, There's nothing greater than this. I wrap my arms around you As you lead us to my bed. The world is filled with silence, There's no word can be said. I feel your body tremble As I hold you oh so near. I'll say these words to you, That no one will ever hear. I hear you breathe beneath me. And the doors are open wide. I feel your invitation, But I dare not go inside. "Let's wait a while longer, Let's not do this tonight. I just can't go and rob What you've fought so hard to hide." So I'll lay beside you instead And feel your heart beat close to mine. Just let me be with you forever, Even past the end of time. |
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| Okay. . . here's my revision on some of the parts. "I soar high through the heavens What could be greater than this?" "There's no word that can be said." "I will whisper words to you That none else shall ever hear." Really beautiful. . . I can't say it's one of my faves but it's good. -Secret | Posted on 2004-09-29 00:00:00 | by secret moon | [ Reply to This ] | holy flippen hanna...omg | this is an amazing display of affection to the core..true and deep. I'm speech-less Your pure lust of the moment in time with her.. not in her...but still in oh wow | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ] | |
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