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    dots Submission Name: Once More I Diedots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 253
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1067



    Description:
       How can I decribe this piece? I'm not sure, I guess I will just say that I was batteling wit myself, the part of myself that lives forever, the soul. The part of me that knows everything there is about me to know. I was trying to convince my soul to do something, anything, with what life I have. And this is what came out!


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    dotsOnce More I Diedots
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    Dearest,

    The time has come, that you and I shall speak. I want, for you, to spill my soul out upon this canvas of stark. I want to admit all the untold thoughts, all the secrets, all the lies. But you see, there's no for written confessions. What has been, was, and what was is finished. All that's left now is what will be. Only you can decide that Dearest. You know all the secrets and all the lie, you know all the hopes and all the dreams. It's for you to decide how you will use them. Because, you see, with every passing second, I die and am reborn into another life. At the end of each breath, I melt away, and quickly reform. You are, however, the eternal one; for you know what we've done, and said, and withheld from this world. And only you can use that to make us what we dream of. Every part of our happiness lies in your control.

    I'll leave you now, to yourself, so that you can decide how to use this life.

    Once more I die.




    Submitted on 2004-09-16 09:52:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow...not really sure what to say about this one. its really deep. i think you should put a description though to help the reader get a better idea of the point your trying to get across. i didnt say you couldnt just that it would help. its still good though. kinda sad b/c some of it tells a little bit of my story with my boyfriend...
    | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by sweet-fire | [ Reply to This ]



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