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How about a cloudless sky?
Would you like a flawless diamond?
How could i, not see you die without a crystal eye?
Death or life,which of both would you confide in?
You claim to be a coffin laying corpse,
a laughing lifeless soul to undergo and live as crow.
The peace i see, is dangerously doomsday,
as you reclaim will be a day, you free your spirit from the grave.
This is impossible!
Another superstitous mental puzzle,
an illusional idea of your dying.so bedazzled,
How could such a morbid thought not be a hassle?
but rather have you feeling like a knight inside a castle,
lost and waiting for your slaying.
waiting,watching over every city,
out for pity, out for feeding,only weak ones are the prey.
Have you negleted your decaying flesh?
| Sorry i can't bash it! it is tooo good. i love it.|
Exellent peice! it is dark and i thought it was kinda sexy too... but that is just me.
|| Posted on 2004-10-04 00:00:00 | by Jesimine | [ Reply to This ] || I liked the way that you broke up the three stanzas with in the poem. The first starting off a little more cheery than the last one for sure. Are you trying to get across the feeling of frustration? Cuase that's what I got from it, just my interpretation. ||| Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Lennox | [ Reply to This ] |