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How about a cloudless sky? Would you like a flawless diamond? How could i, not see you die without a crystal eye? Death or life,which of both would you confide in? You claim to be a coffin laying corpse, a laughing lifeless soul to undergo and live as crow. The peace i see, is dangerously doomsday, as you reclaim will be a day, you free your spirit from the grave. This is impossible! Another superstitous mental puzzle, an illusional idea of your dying.so bedazzled, How could such a morbid thought not be a hassle? but rather have you feeling like a knight inside a castle, lost and waiting for your slaying. waiting,watching over every city, out for pity, out for feeding,only weak ones are the prey. Have you negleted your decaying flesh? |
Sorry i can't bash it! it is tooo good. i love it. Exellent peice! it is dark and i thought it was kinda sexy too... but that is just me. Take care. Jes ![]() | Posted on 2004-10-04 00:00:00 | by Jesimine | [ Reply to This ] | I liked the way that you broke up the three stanzas with in the poem. The first starting off a little more cheery than the last one for sure. Are you trying to get across the feeling of frustration? Cuase that's what I got from it, just my interpretation. | ![]() | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Lennox | [ Reply to This ] | |