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It's these synthesizing jungle beats, that push they are waves
a labyrinth gaze,as horizons are gray....
Would i part ways?
if the words i've learned, i know, don't really reach reasoning
but finish my brain, well, it's quite O.K.
the days are gray
as something surely turns to nothing, and the pain remains,
the ever hungry lethal brain
as tears of fears report emotion, speers run down my face
i tell you not a being or thing
even together as a team, could ever dream to reach.
try and die, as eyes rely,
as to confide in my desires
fire bright,....it blinds!
I shake,and after i space
the fuck away from your existance as to keep my name
the peace cerebral programming
emotional destruction is obstruction of my consciousness
artificially official and i have no sense,nothing.
| Very cool. Great word choice. I think people would definately listen and like this. In terms of lyrics they are very poetic (hey, this is a poetry site, imagine that). I think that poetry is what lyrics are missing nowadays. Great post. Keep writing.|
|| Posted on 2004-10-03 00:00:00 | by Deep_Monty | [ Reply to This ] || everything flows.It's a great write, and you used some intresting words.I agree- the poem could be defined to fit it's rythm- but overall it's a really nice write.|
|| Posted on 2004-09-18 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ] || I liked the word choice. I have read poems that use very strong words when they are not needed, or vice versa, people who use simple words with a very deep, hard, subject. But I think this piece has word choice very well. I don't know why it reminded me of old literature, but it gives off a good vibe. Great write!||| Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by nj | [ Reply to This ] |