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The Days are Gray

Author: Damien Vladimir
ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122 /89 /35
Words: 160
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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The Days are Gray

Taken away!
It's these synthesizing jungle beats, that push they are waves
a labyrinth gaze,as horizons are gray....
answers remain.
Would i part ways?
if the words i've learned, i know, don't really reach reasoning
but finish my brain, well, it's quite O.K.

I say,
the days are gray
as something surely turns to nothing, and the pain remains,
I see,
the ever hungry lethal brain
as tears of fears report emotion, speers run down my face
i tell you not a being or thing
even together as a team, could ever dream to reach.
The disease!!
try and die, as eyes rely,
as to confide in my desires
fire bright, blinds!
blind minds!!!!

I shake,and after i space
the fuck away from your existance as to keep my name
the peace cerebral programming
emotional destruction is obstruction of my consciousness
artificially official and i have no sense,nothing.

Submitted on 2004-09-16 13:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very cool. Great word choice. I think people would definately listen and like this. In terms of lyrics they are very poetic (hey, this is a poetry site, imagine that). I think that poetry is what lyrics are missing nowadays. Great post. Keep writing.

| Posted on 2004-10-03 00:00:00 | by Deep_Monty | [ Reply to This ]
  everything flows.It's a great write, and you used some intresting words.I agree- the poem could be defined to fit it's rythm- but overall it's a really nice write.

| Posted on 2004-09-18 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked the word choice. I have read poems that use very strong words when they are not needed, or vice versa, people who use simple words with a very deep, hard, subject. But I think this piece has word choice very well. I don't know why it reminded me of old literature, but it gives off a good vibe. Great write!
| Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by nj | [ Reply to This ]

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