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Taken away! It's these synthesizing jungle beats, that push they are waves a labyrinth gaze,as horizons are gray.... answers remain. Would i part ways? if the words i've learned, i know, don't really reach reasoning but finish my brain, well, it's quite O.K. I say, the days are gray as something surely turns to nothing, and the pain remains, I see, the ever hungry lethal brain as tears of fears report emotion, speers run down my face nothing, i tell you not a being or thing even together as a team, could ever dream to reach. The disease!! try and die, as eyes rely, as to confide in my desires fire bright,....it blinds! blind minds!!!! I shake,and after i space the fuck away from your existance as to keep my name machine, the peace cerebral programming emotional destruction is obstruction of my consciousness artificially official and i have no sense,nothing. |
Very cool. Great word choice. I think people would definately listen and like this. In terms of lyrics they are very poetic (hey, this is a poetry site, imagine that). I think that poetry is what lyrics are missing nowadays. Great post. Keep writing. ~Monty | Posted on 2004-10-03 00:00:00 | by Deep_Monty | [ Reply to This ] | everything flows.It's a great write, and you used some intresting words.I agree- the poem could be defined to fit it's rythm- but overall it's a really nice write. | -camoflage ![]() | Posted on 2004-09-18 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ] | I liked the word choice. I have read poems that use very strong words when they are not needed, or vice versa, people who use simple words with a very deep, hard, subject. But I think this piece has word choice very well. I don't know why it reminded me of old literature, but it gives off a good vibe. Great write! | | Posted on 2004-09-16 00:00:00 | by nj | [ Reply to This ] | |