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    dots Submission Name: I Writedots
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    Author: pms792005
    ASL Info:    24/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 29/30/8
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 274
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    Bytes: 560



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       For me as for probably everyone on this site writing is how i express emotion. When i get a block i get stressed. I wrote this the other day when i was stressed. I almost like it but i think it starts to fall apart in the middle, or end, or both. So are my thoughts too scattered or do i suck at writing poetry? HELP!


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    dotsI Writedots
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    I write when I don't want to,
    it keeps my mind sharp.
    I write when I don't want to,
    even if my thoughts are all dark.
    I write to find out
    just where to begin.
    I put thoughts on paper
    and find out who I am.
    I write to find a solution
    to a problem with no resolution.
    I write to express my fear and
    when i'm sad i won't cry a tear.
    I begin to find hope,
    I begin to find love.
    I write when i don't want to,
    it gives my heart a shove.




    Submitted on 2004-09-17 00:23:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW! I love this poem! It seems that you stole my thoughts that I always hide from the world and wrote them into something of your own! Those are exactly the reason that I write. I love it!
    | Posted on 2004-09-17 00:00:00 | by Eah | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, I liked it, but i have to agree with the previous post. Might i suggest replacing resolution with resolve it breaks up the rhyme, and still gets the point across.
    | Posted on 2004-09-17 00:00:00 | by curiosityskitty | [ Reply to This ]



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