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    dots Submission Name: Here With Medots
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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 574
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    Bytes: 1066



    Description:
       A poem that was inspired by, like, the whole Third Eye Blind self-titled CD. It was named by my best friend Dean, the coolest white African ever!!! (He's from South Africa)


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    dotsHere With Medots
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    Take me in your arms and lead me far, far away. Tell me how much you want to be with me today. My world is crashing, turning upside down. But when I'm with you I could never feel a frown touch my face, not quite the way you do. So lead me away into a perfect daze thus I can be with you. And you will be the best for me, I will be the one for you. Stroke me softly and kiss me purely. Touch me gently and we will just be, we will just exist. Lovers' perfection without the correction of other's jealousy. Breathing deeply, you are the only one I could ever truly see. Frozen in time is a moment that's mine, that's ours. Aphrodite sings out in joy, weeping for innocence that has melded with love, causing all former worries to melt away and pass with ancient time. When I'm with you, an enhanced being exists of sensuous subtleness, and there is only me with you. Eternal is now, forever is ours, a passionate love that brands my heart with an immortal flame.

    And I will be the one for you, you will be the best for me.




    Submitted on 2003-11-27 17:18:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      whee... i like the reference to Aphrodite. I like the way it was in a paragraph, actually... it made it flow together, anyway it was neat =^..^= also I can identify... ~Windover
    | Posted on 2003-11-28 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]



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