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    dots Submission Name: WHATEVERdots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 401
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1493



    Description:
       This is a song that I wrote a couple of hours ago... I don't have any music to it, so... it's unsingable at the moment... but that still doesn't change what it is!


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    I don't know what kind of person I am,
    And I don't know what kind of person you are.
    All I know is that for some reason,
    You can't stand to think of me.
    Friendship is all about listening,
    It's about understanding,
    And being there to help.
    The give and take to any relationship
    Applies in friendships as well.

    All I know is that you're not there.
    All I know is that you don't care.
    And though we made it through strong,
    Nothing of what we had lives on.

    Sometimes I wish I could take it all back
    And sometimes I wish I could rewrite how it happened.
    But you found what I was hiding inside
    And you will never forget it,
    You will never let it go.

    All I know is that you're not there.
    All I know is that you don't care.
    And though we made it through strong,
    Nothing of what we had lives on.

    Why did you have to say what you did?
    Why can't things be the same?
    With all the "If only's" and the "what if's" running through my head.
    And all the while where are you?

    All I know is that you're not there.
    All I know is that you don't care.
    And though we made it through strong,
    Nothing of what we had lives on.
    But I guess we were never friends!




    Submitted on 2004-09-17 22:01:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmmm... I feel your pain. I understand the trauma of losing a good friend, it is absolutely terrible and in some ways even worse than losing a lover. Friends are supposed to be there your whole life, someone you can always count on. I liked this piece because you illustrated the things that a good friend should be, and realized that this person who you have lost, may not have even been a friend at all. Hang in there... there are some good people in the world!
    | Posted on 2004-09-17 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]



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