sitting outside...
letting the wind blow your name into my mind
turning my senses into molasses
I can’t breathe...
laying on my couch...
I close my eyes as flashes of your face pierce my
mind like a dagger
making me sink deeper into unconscious bliss
I cannot move...
looking at the sky...
I think about all the eyes that have stared at the
same stars and I know that you have looked at them as well and I think about how close that makes me feel to you, this mirage I have of you so close by yet not really
I can’t move...
walking down the street...
I can feel the eyes of passers by and I wonder will I
see your eyes glancing at me again with that stare that melts my spirit until it bursts into flames
I can’t even sleep...
not so sure I would call this a random thought...... actually this piece made me strum a little..... reads smoothly.. and would need a little polishing as a song, but as poetry, it works because of its honesty and emotion, yet as lyrics, the clichés wouldnt matter so much... nice one... keep em coming
i think it's pretty cool. maybe not as a random thought, but i felt it more as poetry. but maybe there is a reason u choose random thought over poetry... would like to know what it was
Submission Name: flying thoughts
