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    dots Submission Name: The Beginning Is The Enddots
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    Author: Cai
    ASL Info:    17/f/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 1162/401/71
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 327
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 401



    Description:
       This is about who I fall in love with. I always fall in love with people who it is never possible to have a relationship with, so I just fall into a fantasy world where I can be with them, and where the world can't tell me it is wrong.

    I'm having a real block for good titles...


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    dotsThe Beginning Is The Enddots
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    Every attraction
    Appears to be a controversy
    Another self-debate
    Regarding whether it is wrong.

    Every time I open my heart
    The possibilities end
    right at the beginning.

    I still succomb to my fantasy world
    Where possibility has the potential to arise
    Where I can't be let down
    By my mind's irregularities.




    Submitted on 2004-09-18 19:56:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Maybe that feeling of something missing inside is you feeling what the writer is feeling, Raksha? Does that make sense anyone?
    Anyways, the poem was...good. But the description you gave sort of gave everything away. It sorta would've been cool for us readers to try and inter[ret it our own ways but, nonetheless, it was a good poem.
    Aken Sol
    | Posted on 2004-09-19 00:00:00 | by Aken Sol | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a good poem, though the end was weak in a way, when I read it I feel like something else is missing but I just do not know what is.
    | Posted on 2004-09-18 00:00:00 | by Raksha | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the fantasy world thing...i seem to constantly live in mine..i wish icould feel love again but it hurts so much...why do we always want what we cant have and turn away from that which is right in front of our faces?
    | Posted on 2004-09-18 00:00:00 | by alma-perdida | [ Reply to This ]



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