Hey the poem is lovely ,short but nice ,reminds me of how much i love sundays... and yes i do have a restful nature on sundays...laze around and have fun ...positive outlook as well..yes...
I was born on a Sunday morning. I really liked the description you gave of how a true Sunday morning is. I have always enjoyed Sundays. Great job. -blt
Well, I'm not a fan of Sundays, but this was a sweet poem. I listened to a Velvet Underground song with the same title earlier (Well, that's my Sunday morning song, so I do most every Sunday). This isn't bad, but I agree with alan about the sun.
Im just wondering if it was just a random thought or something a lot more deep, either way it doesnt matter, in its simplicity it radiates something beautiful and quit different. I loved it, and the feelings and visuals you get from your well chosen words are perfect. Let me know, and thanks for your comment on my poem streets of hope too.
Submission Name: Sunday Morning
