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    dots Submission Name: from afardots
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    Author: anarchyrainsupreme
    ASL Info:    16/m/usa
    Elite Ratio:    0.79 - 82/68/12
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 741
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 730



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    dotsfrom afardots
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    As she enterrs the hallway all time seems to slow for her.
    Everything but she fades into a blur.
    She flashes a smile that imitates the suns ray,
    But that beautiful smile won't be turned my way.
    Such lovely and caring eyes,
    But they only care for other guys.
    Such beautiful lips that I long to kiss,
    But all they seem to do to me is dismiss.
    Time then continues on its original course.
    She approaches and my voice goes hoarse.
    But no matter for I am passed through like an apparation.
    All that is heard is a sigh of frustration.
    For as an astronomer is to a star,
    this girl i am forced to admire from afar.




    Submitted on 2003-11-27 18:03:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this realli moved mi as a expiernce. its realli from the heart, tat wad i tink, isit?
    | Posted on 2003-11-30 00:00:00 | by codemaster21 | [ Reply to This ]



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