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    dots Submission Name: Visions of Realitydots
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    Author: lost_escape
    ASL Info:    16/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 44/60/23
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 262
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 356



    Description:
       I don't know.....trying to forget the past, and live in the present


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    dotsVisions of Realitydots
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    A loss of conscienceness
    losing the mind
    Caught up in the past,
    you can't unwind
    Problems are overwhelming
    people don't care
    Life flat out sucks,
    no one is fare
    Come back to realtiy,
    leave the asylum for the dead
    Just think and remember
    Most's in your head




    Submitted on 2004-09-19 22:10:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Spelling mistake with the "fare". I like the life is but a dream approach, but i also get the feeling of drug use. Short, almost a vent, it calls for a longer more elaborate spin, but maybe not.
    | Posted on 2004-09-19 00:00:00 | by Josh | [ Reply to This ]



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