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    dots Submission Name: Deathdots
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    Author: curiosityskitty
    ASL Info:    30/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 145/149/30
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/
    Total Views: 376
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 620



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       Be gentle :-) I wrote this a long, LONG time ago. I just want to see.


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    dotsDeathdots
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    From the corner of my eye
    I see him move
    And not to my suRprise
    When I turn to look
    He is gone

    But this does not put my mind at ease
    For I know he waits beyond my sight's reach
    Again I see him
    This time face to face
    "No" I say, but who hears
    Certainly not he

    He enters my soul
    "God" I say in reverence
    I feel his icy fingers trace down my spine
    And I cringe
    "It's time" he says yet he does not speak
    A bright flash, then darkness
    I am at peace.




    Submitted on 2004-09-20 23:20:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it's 12:30am, what can i say. No body is perfect. 'scuse the mastakes seein as how i'm frum tenessee, them thar's common place when y'aint got no ejumacation.
    | Posted on 2004-09-21 00:00:00 | by curiosityskitty | [ Reply to This ]
      Just a few spelling mistakes ,'surprise' and sight's.Rectify these please , this piece is quite original.Death can be quite terrorising .good work
    | Posted on 2004-09-21 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah! There he is! He's around every bend, peeking through every keyhole, hiding in every closet, lurking in every shadow, coarsing through every soul. It seems you finally captured him in words, or perhaps he captured you!
    Good work.
    | Posted on 2004-10-20 00:00:00 | by Eggman | [ Reply to This ]



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