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    Author: perfect_apology
    ASL Info:    27/girl/your back pocket
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 48/59/19
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 319
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 505



    Description:
       from the edge of my mind, trying to capture the fleeting memory of a first meeting with an old friend.


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    the air felt
    soft
    between us
    more than just space

    less than distance
    his breath
    in the quiet

    comfortable
    real
    not safe
    not free
    but no longer caged

    was i crushed?
    or just plain
    scared

    to listen
    without sound
    to see
    what would not
    hide

    when
    words without form
    became flesh
    without words.





    Submitted on 2004-09-22 00:57:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      old friends are always tough to meet. you made me think about this. after i come home from japan, it's gonna be so weird, because you miss so much of that persons life. after a bottle of jack and a lot of catching up though, it's just like old times. but it's hard to see my girlfriend, after not seeing her for a year, whew! cannot wait for that! good poem, i liked it!
    | Posted on 2004-09-22 00:00:00 | by austin | [ Reply to This ]



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