its 10pm im bored
its 11pm there nothing on tv
its 12pm the computer crashed
its 1am im really tired
its 2am im looking at porn
its 3am im haveing a smoke
its 4am im pondering the great questions
its 5am im drinking coffie
its 6am im writting shit poetry for mindless morons who think they are special cos they can make a few words rhyme.
its 7am the clock just stoped
a mighty oak tree
hundreds of years
in the makeing
lies rotting on the ground.
its slowly being eaten away
by woodworm and fungus
to leave hollow shell
of what once was.
around it are other trees
damaged as the oak colapsed.
years of growth undone
by one falling tree.
a mighty oak tree
hundreds of years
in the makeing
lies dead in the cold dark forest.
10 years of failed marrage
2 in seperate beds
8 months of constant fighting
400 times you've wished me dead
5 years of depression
6 hours in this bar
8 glasses os whisky
19 shakey steps to my car
2 minutes to find the keys
7 miles home to bed
3 boxes of tablets
not 1 minute of regret.
I don't think all of these are bad poems, I actually like most of em! You seem to have a real knack for writing, you are very talented and I hope you keep on writing! I am gonna add this to my favorites list... it's actually pretty neat poetry in my eyes. Keep up the great work!
actually i liked Bad Girl. the other ones were a little, um, way to simple for my liking. but i think if you tweaked Bad Girl juuuuuust a little i would be really good
I personally liked the last one. Ive never heard of someone posting their worst poems and actually classifying them under that. Im not going to go over grammatical errors or spelling with you, because these poems symbolize something different. They show that theres good, theres bad, and then theres worse (although none of these were worse, or bad for that matter) They were simple words, simply put, but at the same time each poem meant something, contained a theme and had expression to it. Anways. I was drawn in by the title. What a different title. I personally liked this compilation of poems. it was amusing. -Andrya
in the second one should that be porno not prono? Some of these i actually liked. I thought they were kinda cool. Some of them not all. I liked Bad girl. I think thats ok not worthy of a seperate post but still kinda cool. See you in hell that was funny. Ok sorry i'll leave now Pryncess
What's wrong with these poems? Sure they've got no meaning, they have terrible flow and pace, yes, perhaps they are a bit crude, and maybe even wrong, of course, they are dry and cumbersome, but, man, the show style... no matter how bad that style is
Yeah, you were correct for putting "4 worst poems" as the title. Heh, the last one is not so bad, but the first three are like.. woah.. that is poetry? But I like the last line in the last poem. That ended it well and it kind of took me by surprise. I like surprise endings, they seem to make the whole poem better. Ha ha, well anyways. Yeah.. the last one was alright.
well i have to say that you are right they are shi**y poems. i kind of liked the last one but not as a poem maybe random thoughts. good work at sucking lol
How Dare: I didn't like the rhyming in it... I don't genearlly like rhyming poetry, unless there's a reason for it, and in this case, it seemed to be just rambling rhyming, which is always VERY annoying...
Damn Clock: You might not want to hear this, but I liked this one. I mean yes it's very monotonous, but it doesn't rhyme, it bashes rhyming, and it's hold some aspect of curiousity by what you meant when you said "the clock just stopped" is that a litearal or a figurative meaning?
Submission Name: my SIX worst poems
