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Author: Marbles
ASL Info:    24/M/IN
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Nothing in particular just felt like writing it


Change



Why does change have to happen
Everything comes and goes
Friends come into your life
Then they leave without saying a word

As soon as you get use to something it's gone
You want it to come back
It never will though
There can not be sameness in this world

If there was it might be boring
but constant change is unnerving

I would like things to just stay the same
Although I feel it is time for change




Submitted on 2004-09-23 08:25:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Whoa - no! Change is the only constant man. All the time things are changing and they have to. Even the dead change. To pine against change is pissing into the wind - ur better off just adapting, painful as that might be.
shard
| Posted on 2004-09-23 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
  i get the feeling that in this poem it's a sense of feeling kinda lost and faceless as we all do sometimes but then again life has it's own way of pushing us towards self identity i may be way off on my little perception of this but either way it's clear your a talented poet and that this poem is very well written... keep pouring emotion into your poetry and i bet you'll be one of the top ten writers on this site in no time well i hope to read more of your work in the futre so keep on writing
love nat
| Posted on 2004-09-23 00:00:00 | by Nataliah_Coffin | [ Reply to This ]
  i get the feeling that in this poem it's a sense of feeling kinda lost and faceless as we all do sometimes but then again life has it's own way of pushing us towards self identity i may be way off on my little perception of this but either way it's clear your a talented poet and that this poem is very well written... keep pouring emotion into your poetry and i bet you'll be one of the top ten writers on this site in no time well i hope to read more of your work in the futre so keep on writing
love nat
| Posted on 2004-09-23 00:00:00 | by Nataliah_Coffin | [ Reply to This ]


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