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    dots Submission Name: Speechless Tearsdots
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    Author: Scribbles1338
    ASL Info:    18/Female/St. Louis
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 169/167/37
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 1133
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       Crying out of the realization that the one whom you love is also in love with you. I like it.


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    A single teardrop remains frozen for eternity upon my cheek. I tremble, speechless. You have always left me speechless, and now I am in a place from which I cannot return. That very tear has been the one to finally consume me. That very tear is my worst fear, and at the same time, my sliver of hope.
    You always left me in a state of confusion; speechless. And now, what is left of me? Is there so much as a shadow of the darkness which had permeated my soul? Can you see the agony? Because it is no longer there, it has washed away with these tears of mine. Tears of glass, these pearl-like droplets glide down my cheek. They only linger for a moment, dry up, evaporate. But they shall forever reside in my memory.
    Thank you.
    I once again find myself speechless, for your ability to do so is still strong. Forever you shall remain here, embedded in my memory as the One Who Could. Nobody else could ever do this to me, they all left me cold and frightened. But not you…you never hurt me, never let me forget myself. You always have left me speechless…and you have never allowed me to forget, never.
    You made me cry my beautiful tears of glass simply because I loved you. And I still love you. With every miniscule glass pearl that slides down my cheek, I love you more. And I am still speechless, simply because you…love…me…




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      this was beautiful; a wonderful piece of art. i could feel the happiness radiating from this poem. it was very descriptive, and for a second i felt as if i were you. great write, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2004-09-23 00:00:00 | by darkness child | [ Reply to This ]
      A single teardrop remains frozen for eternity upon my cheek. I tremble, speechless. You have always left me speechless, and now I am in a place from which I cannot return. That very tear has been the one to finally consume me. That very tear is my worst fear, and at the same time, my sliver of hope.
    You always left me in a state of confusion; speechless.

    to me there are no words...and like your poem I am left speechless...this is beautifully written and its wonderful...I was wondering where all the prose writers were hiding
    | Posted on 2004-09-23 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]


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