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    dots Submission Name: Beauty's Child And The Decrepidots
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    Author: decrepidcorpse
    ASL Info:    27/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 26/29/17
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       some one told me in this poem that it reminded them of the old time menstrels music...
    saying what one wants to say but couldn't find the words to say...


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    dotsBeauty's Child And The Decrepidots
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    awake thee lust angel, for thine eyes see
    only thee and the night hath no contemp in your
    presence...
    as cupid may hold a facade to your name, flush from beneath your faerie wings a river of crystaline tears wept from a thousand angels and engourged by flames neath the devil's chin...
    drowning in my blood which beats through my heart which love thee,and cry an eternal cry, a cry for you...
    yet a cry never answered and a cry to be
    mourned...
    a cry to be loved and wallowed in...
    wallow in my cries for thee till the dusk
    shade my life as i preserve this rose...
    sleep deep my wicked angel and let thy faeries
    wings kiss thine eyes blessed with my lips...
    kiss thine and we shall be twined through
    blessings of heaven sent wicked children of
    the darkened blood moon...
    neath which we shall be lush and die the perishable death of"beauty's child,and the decrepidly cursed"




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