Description: I wrote this for the love of my life, AMA...She moved a few months ago. This was written in reflection of all the times we had shared together.
Also, the spanish part in the chorus says:
Porque - Because
Pero - But
Te Amo - I love you
Siempre - Always
Salud - Cheers
Hope ya like it.
Salud -------------------------------------------
Salud
Tonight you'll stagger in
Through the cold night air
To a bar that’s void of friends
And you will not find me there
A silence will replace
All the laughs that we once had
And tonight you will pay
For the saddest drink you'll ever have
And I hope
Tonight you'll think of me
'Cause I will think of you
Porque te amo
Siempre
Salud
Just one ounce of loving you
Top the glass off with salt
A tablespoon of losing you
Garnished with a broken heart
Tonight you'll toast to you and me
To days of smiles and cigarettes
A toast to all the memories
Of nights of love and no regrets
And I know
Soon you'll find a way
And you'll find someone new
Pero te amo
Siempre
Salud
very bittersweet... this is a beautiful love poem, my friend. "..Tonight You Will Pay/For The Saddest Drink You'll Ever Have.." so very very melancholy. my favorite part:
Just One Ounce Of Loving You Top The Glass Off With Salt A Tablespoon Of Losing You Garnished With A Broken Heart
my only issue is with all the capitals. i think it would read smoother and be more effective without all the caps.
I got shivers. I recently lost my fiance to the army (she couldn't handle me being away). Your words encapsulate the feelings that have haunted me since. I wish that I had a guitar in my lap right now, I want to put it music!
And I Hope Tonight You'll Think Of Me 'Cause I Will Think Of You Porque Te Amo Siempre Salud
Just One Ounce Of Loving You Top The Glass Off With Salt A Tablespoon Of Losing You Garnished With A Broken Heart
me gusto mucho...por favor dime, more...I really enjoyed these stanzas because I could see them in my head...and I hope to see more of your work...I enjoyed this very much Gracias
Submission Name: Salud
