Description: just a thought on my relationship! do what you will with it.
Our Love -------------------------------------------
Perspiration glistening on our skin
Legs intertwine as we become one
Ecstasy explodes from our lips
Lying spent in each others arms
The sweet glories of our love
This was awesome. This poem reminds me of a haiku in that it expressesw so many emotions and meaning in just so few a lines. Keey at it and hope your headache has gone away. Aken Sol
short, sweet, romantic, a lil dirty depending on who you are and what kind of mood your in, to the point..i love it. favs for you. this is one of those "i dont care what kinda mood i'm in this piece with make it better" piece. PS
Submission Name: Our Love
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