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Author: mimi
ASL Info:    30/f/ny
Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111
Words: 60
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I wrote this during the pager days...


143 was the message
you left and I
found that my reply was a 411.
Do you love me?
Could it be?
Is it true?
Do I, in turn love you?
What pain my 411 must bring?
Yet I sing ,
Fly on a wing,
Given to me
From your 143.

Submitted on 2004-09-24 00:58:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ehm, strange, but what are you talking about? I read it more then once to get a slight hint. but for now. I really have now clue.
| Posted on 2004-09-24 00:00:00 | by FantasizedDream | [ Reply to This ]

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