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    dots Submission Name: Shiningdots
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    Author: littlecoombs
    ASL Info:    18/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 100/98/24
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 297
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Shining

    From the Dark, a star shines through,
    Into the sky of cloudy blue
    Across the heavens, shining bright
    Cutting through the bitter night

    Reaching out, it shows its light
    To deepest depth to highest height
    Outward goes its God sent glow
    Searching for those lost below

    Lying in the filthy dust
    A small boy feels the slightest gust
    He looks up to the shining star
    And hopes that it is not too far

    The light comes close, and sees the child
    Torn and spoilt by evil's wilds
    It reaches for the little boy
    Who has no hope, He has no joy

    He reaches out his tiny hand
    To be pulled from the awful sand
    And as the boy is lifted high
    He lets go and begins to fly

    His dusty hands, now white as snow
    His face filled with a joyful glow
    Disappearing are his scars
    His hands now shining like the stars

    Now he flies across the lands
    Serving with his healing hands
    And as he heals those in the night
    They too begin to show their light

    Across the skies a dawn is breaking
    All around, the Earth is shaking
    Lights are shining everywhere
    With revival in the air




    Submitted on 2004-09-24 21:20:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thought this was a wonderful piece of poetry. It was very uplifting, hopeful. I can say that though I am no longer a christian, it is nice to see someone who is so capable of sharing his faith so beautifully. Exelent job!
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by ebflannery | [ Reply to This ]
      How many times I've looked to the sky and searched for hope I cannot say, but I have to say that I felt I was with this person on his journey. You pulled me in, and that is one of the greatest things a person can do with writing. Good work,
    HWKI
    | Posted on 2004-09-24 00:00:00 | by HWKI | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this, its really sweet and puts hopeful thoughts in my mind. i cant point out any thing wrong, i dont see any. i love the description of the star its self, that part was really done well. great work.
    | Posted on 2004-09-24 00:00:00 | by wretched_muse | [ Reply to This ]



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