Description: this is a poem my friend wrote. and well she says i am monkey and the friend i kiss is my best mate, lol. she hasn't decided who the lover and mrs monkey is tho, and i hope she doesn't. knowing her she'll pick two more boys for the role.
The Monkey Song -------------------------------------------
Monkey see, Monkey do
Monkey darling loves you too
Monkey wants to climb a tree
But Monkey dear cannot breathe
Silly Monkey climbed that tree
Monkey nearly died for free
Then Monkey smiled and said
“This Monkey isn’t dead!”
Mr. Monkey fell off a cliff
And Mr. Monkey gave his friend a kiss
Monkey’s friend broke his nose
And Monkey stepped on his friend’s toes
Monkey’s lover came to stay
But Monkey made her go away
Monkey cried and cried all night
And then Monkey got into another fight
Mrs. Monkey came home late
And found Mr. Monkey in a state
She yelled at Monkey for a while
But Monkey left her when she whined
I got a good laugh out of this Monkey poem. Quite creative here! We all need this kind of poem once in awhile to start our day on a happy and cheerful note. Thanks for sharing! ~Linda
lol that was really neat, original and funny! good poem! i loved the imagry also and how it almost sounds sad at a few places but then it is too funny to be sad.
that is the coolest thing ever! it kinda makes you realize that we are monkeys...in a way. we'll die for someone, fall out of a tree for someone, and risk our poor little noses for someone. we're silly. Good job. Your friend is creative.
This is so awesome, I love comic stuff, and this is really original. I have to say, I've read a few of your things already, and I really like how you don't just do one type of poem. You have your death-metal lyrics, your love poetry, and a comic poem about primates. Very nice. I'd say these monkeys seem to represent people pretty well, at least the people I know. "Monkey’s lover came to stay But Monkey made her go away Monkey cried and cried all night And then Monkey got into another fight"
Oh, the constant drama. And I also like how monkey left mrs. monkey at the end because she whined. Anyway, thanks for the comic relief amongst all the serious poetry out there, and thanks for commenting on my ABC poem that you added to your favorites. It was a tough thing to write, and I'm glad that you liked the result. Anyway, keep up the writing, and nice lyrics too, by the way -Vanessa
Submission Name: The Monkey Song
that is the coolest thing ever! it kinda makes you realize that we are monkeys...in a way. we'll die for someone, fall out of a tree for someone, and risk our poor little noses for someone. we're silly. Good job. Your friend is creative. 
