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    dots Submission Name: What am I?dots
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    Author: Aksuri
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 45/13/1
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Riddle/Comedy
    Total Views: 531
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1079



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       This is my riddle. Can you tell me "what am I?"...

    If you find two answers, one not pertaining to the riddle itself, please be respectful... one.

    The innocent may find it a pleasant surprise. The tainted will find a frown. The comic will find it unoriginal.


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    dotsWhat am I?dots
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    I wish I was black.
    Blacks can glide through with speed and agility.
    We browns can be much sharper than the blacks,
    but not always.
    We browns are less likely to bust a cap because we have no cap to bust.
    We are usually shorter than blacks but not always.
    We get smaller with age.
    The stereotypes are terrible for the browns just because we travel in bulk and work at low prices.
    We're not as strong as the blacks.
    We have the advantage of covering our tracks in white territory; the blacks are too messy.
    We both are scared of the whites out and most don't mind getting "high lit."
    We both are made for doing lines.
    Without us the whites would be blank of idea.










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      Wonderful! I really had to think... I guess that doesn't saymuch for me huh? I really really liked you riddle. Pencil is the answer of course and I didn't want to be a cheater so I just stared at my computer trying to figure it out. I think that my boss thinks that I'm on drugs.
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by ashlee_jane2003 | [ Reply to This ]
      you are a true talent my friend...yes, awsoem riddle the diffenent twists this one can take on each individual mind...wowsers.
    very very well done again...
    I thought pencil...yet, well too true to the content...i'll keep it pencil
    good one...very good
    | Posted on 2004-09-30 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      You didn't leave a big enough blank...*L*

    oh, hey, since you enjoy writing backwards stuff, check out my poem sdrawkcab...it's in my poetry archive somewhere...you'd most likely find it amusing!
    | Posted on 2004-09-27 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      I believe you are a pencil:

    pens glide yhrough with speed and agility,
    pencils are sharper than pens,
    pencils get smaller with age, travel in bulk, snap easier and are cheaper.

    pencils can cover their tracks in white territory, with an eraser. Afraid of white out but don't mind highlighters, also pencils do lines...

    Yes, I am certain you are a pencil
    | Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by Stalking Sylvia | [ Reply to This ]
      We have the advantage of covering our tracks in white territory; the blacks are too messy.
    We both are scared of the whites out and most don't mind getting "high lit."
    We both are made for doing lines.
    Without us the whites would be blank of idea.

    i liked this...you have creative thinking...unlike Bailey I believe that you already know where you fit in and in some cases it has nothing to do with society because soceity trained you to be this way, to look at the world this way...I'm guessing that your asian according to your brown skin...this is a neat little riddle I liked it very much...thanks for the write...
    | Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]
      You are someone who is confused. Asking yourself where do i fit in with or without society.
    We all have an equal share to the contribution of life not as the world as we know it. Do you feel unrecognised to the population and you mix in with the crowd. Just so that someone would know your name. Or is acceptance that you seek?
    | Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by Bailey19 | [ Reply to This ]
      okay, this is going to take some thinking! i have a hard time with riddles, my brain doesn't work very well that way! hmmm... let me think on it and i'll get back to ya!
    | Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Very clever indeed! and they say men are simple minded. lol. Thanks for the brain tease and amusement. Brownsdelight

    p.s that was so much fun how bout some more?
    | Posted on 2004-10-22 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      your riddle is very good..lemme guess, you make lines so you must be a pencil...maybe I cheated maybe I didn't but I think to me the lines gave it away, because otherwise a paper would have no thought
    | Posted on 2004-10-28 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]



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