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His 'n' Hers


Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 81 /70 /50
Words: 93
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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His 'n' Hers



Two hearts on a fair dawn collided.
Both controlled by forces of sheer chance.
One; slim-figured with pretty smiles'
The other, mixed-natured with a gift.
Both reaching for same 'fleece'...
His with a passion; whilst
Hers with a potential.
Natures' black mantle wore His 'n' Hers
But one with skin-tone hairy black
And the other, chocolatey-flavour.
Yet, one heart both had
Which manufactures thoughts,
Reasonings coated with impicit feelings,
Feelings reserved solely for two solitary thoughts apart...






Submitted on 2004-09-25 14:18:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I am sorry to say this but i think this piece is a bit muddled, there are parts that don't make sense to me. it seems as though it has just been put on paper and not even a thought given. but that's just my opinion.
Best of luck
Jes
| Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by Jesimine | [ Reply to This ]


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