okay, where are the three?? first the woman he made you to be, then the real you and last but not least the girl he knew. but isn't the girl he knew the woman he made you to be?? could be that I'm a bit retarded at the moment (it's already late...). anyway I like this piece. you have chosen to write about something very common (unfortunately a lot of women tend to let guys make them into a different person) but you did it very well and in an original way. the first line is really good. it's interesting and draws the reader in cause he/she wants to know your motif. very well done, Amy.
you changed yourself to please someone else, i'm guessing... (maybe not really, 'cause i know you don't always write from experience). we all have the capacity to do this, be someone we're not just to be with someone. not a good idea, eh? it's like wearing different masks. we all do that to some extent. i like the idea of "killing" the woman he made you, 'cause she's really not you. do it up royale, then! have a funeral and everything for her. let her rot, um, rest in peace! i like it!
Dinner with the dog huh....I liked the intent here. I feel maybe line 3 is redundant given the lines that surround it. Not the newest idea out there so I feel this one falls a little short considering its length......and the power of the lines Really needs to be more potent or paint a vividly fresh scene from the same theme to stand out. Promising