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    dots Submission Name: Here I amdots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 529



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    dotsHere I amdots
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    Here I am
    waiting for you
    why you don't come
    I don't know
    Here I am
    hurting for you
    but I never get a
    thank you
    Here I am
    torn between two
    I am not
    going ot choose
    Here I am
    staying strong
    for you
    and I'm willing
    to stand between the
    storm
    and you
    Here I am
    watching as you
    turn a cold shoulder
    and walk from view
    Here i am
    Where are you?




    Submitted on 2004-09-26 17:40:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was a good write and kind of sad, like the emotion was of neglection..It stays to the poin too...well i cant think of anything else except that i really liked it and i hope to see more...bye
    | Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it... you have one typo: "ot" needs to be "to"... the end really suprised me. I guess i was expecting the person to be with you, but it sounds like they betrayed you after all you've done for them. It's really gripping. I like the rhyming, even though i'm not a big fan of it. It works with this, though. Good job.
    | Posted on 2004-09-26 00:00:00 | by winged_writer_robyn | [ Reply to This ]



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