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    Author: Kera
    ASL Info:    18-f-NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 116/129/29
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 861
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    In my heart and in my soul,
    you will never truly know.
    half human, half alike,
    but fully able to love and like.
    No way to show and no way to prove,
    how true my love is for you.
    the blood from my viens that I drew,
    was not from pain made by you.
    but to prove everything that I am and was,
    all now belongs to you because,
    you gave me life, you made me real,
    there is no way to show how I feel.
    all for me that you have done,
    I have never recieved from anyone,
    it seemed like nothing and so small,
    but for me it saved my world, about to fall.
    I dont know how you did it, how you saved me,
    but now my only quest is for you to see,
    that my life and love belongs to you,
    because no one else was so true.
    Do with it what you wish,
    but I dream of only 1 kiss.




    Submitted on 2004-09-27 19:13:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Things are easier to say things to others how chooses to her them, then who there actually meant for. Grate poem keep fighting the god fight.
    | Posted on 2004-10-05 00:00:00 | by Joebot | [ Reply to This ]
      the beginning was good... but then the end was great... working with climax till the end. the images of love danced through my head. it was sweet words that stand out like a mad man. props on the great write.
    | Posted on 2004-09-28 00:00:00 | by drkpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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