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    Author: Paradox
    ASL Info:    25/m/Earthbound
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 520/314/58
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Do you think that every step you take
    Is bringing you closer to your death
    Or further away from your screaming mother ?




    Submitted on 2004-09-28 08:41:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      interesting way of putting it. But, I think your question is really asking something where the answer is the same. Yes.
    | Posted on 2008-06-21 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
      No matter what we do, we are closer to death. As for my mother, I never knew a quieter person. But you know what? I like your style.
    | Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by Malcolm Bishop | [ Reply to This ]
      brilliance in brevity. kinda a water in the glass conundrum as to whether we are optamists or realists...lol... You are a true talent and deserve much praise. hurry up and publish a book, I'm ready to help fund the redecoration of your den.
    | Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by cainboy | [ Reply to This ]
      I am a fan of short and to the point, but with such an intriging question asked, I need more. Maybe as a part of the description, so not to mess with the poem?
    | Posted on 2004-09-28 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that each step you take brings you one step closer to where you're going... makes sence right? So tell me my friend, if you will, what inspired you to ask such a question... I would love to hear your opinion on this piece... Take care bro and i hope to hear from you... Adios, Travis
    | Posted on 2004-09-28 00:00:00 | by Mwa Ha Ha Ha Ha | [ Reply to This ]
      yay for keeping it short! you said what you needed to say and got out which is what so few existential pieces accomplish with 50 lines or more.
    bravo.
    | Posted on 2004-09-28 00:00:00 | by perfect_apology | [ Reply to This ]


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